The concept for your symbols is unique and tells a cohesive story. It flows nicely from one event to the next. The figures are well rendered, but the negative space in some of the male figues does lose a tad bit of detail. You could try a regular outline to help,. I would also look at the camera and bus symbols again. The music notes are a bit too large, so maybe using outlines of them would work. The camera could benefit from a bit more white space, maybe changing the lens to all white and adding a black shutter would help.
The concept for your symbols is unique and tells a cohesive story. It flows nicely from one event to the next. The figures are well rendered, but the negative space in some of the male figues does lose a tad bit of detail. You could try a regular outline to help,. I would also look at the camera and bus symbols again. The music notes are a bit too large, so maybe using outlines of them would work. The camera could benefit from a bit more white space, maybe changing the lens to all white and adding a black shutter would help.
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